The school newspaper came out today. And my girl, my 13 year old baby, had the front page article! Which I had not read before it came out. And I am so impressed, because that girl can write! My chest is all puffed out, and I am re-printing it here. It is about School Spirit Week.
One Week a Year by Jess Waters
I originally wrote a massive article on the topic of school spirit. It was over two pages in Microsoft Word (somewhere in the 600-700 word range) and that wasn’t even done yet.
My article was originally titled “But Isn’t This All Just Stupid Anyways?” I wish I could say it was a cynical but controlled criticism of emotional attachment to one’s educational institution, but it was really just me whining about having to re-hang the green and yellow streamers when people tore them down between class periods.
I had a-million-and-three snide remarks, but the thing was–after reading over my own words–I noticed how clumsy and gawky they sounded. I kept contradicting myself in my writing, not even realizing I was doing it. Every argument I made, I refuted. I rambled. I couldn’t make a point.
Well, the point was that I certainly couldn’t turn this article in to my Journalism teacher and expect it to be published. I spent days struggling to figure out how to write this article, trying to figure out why my first draft was such a failure, why I didn’t like it. I kept promising Mrs. (Teacher) the article was “almost done” after spending an hour a night staring at a blank document. I came this close to giving up and writing an article about extra credit, instead. But just before I typed out that first extra credit related sentence, I had an epiphany.
Before, I had interpreted all this “spirit week stuff” as a desperate attempt to create that impossible-to-achieve intimacy with students. I interpreted this as an opportunity to make each individual student feel special. But I don’t think that’s what it is. I think it’s better than that.
Spirit Week is an opportunity to create unity, to create memories. The point is to be able to look back ten years from now at the blur of classes and crushes and extracurricular activities, and to remember what it felt like to see the homecoming game stands packed so full that the overflow meant that half the people in the opposing team’s stands were rooting for (OurSchool’sTeam) too!
The point of Spirit Week is to remember what it was like to see an English teacher busting some crazy Michael Jackson moves on the middle of the football field. The point is to remember, in the words of student (Firstname Lastname), that “school can be fun for one week a year.”
Spirit Week is not about creating intimacy. It’s about creating a spectacle. It’s about having the time of your life. It’s about having the Class of Dimes going out with a bang, and the freshman coming in with a boom, and the sophomores and juniors making a heck of a lot of noise of their own.

21 Comments
November 4, 2009 at 4:51 pm
The apple doesn’t fall far from the tree, Corey.
November 4, 2009 at 6:26 pm
Very terrific!
November 4, 2009 at 6:52 pm
Yeah Jess! Great Job! Yeah for you too Cor, she comes rightly by it! xox
November 4, 2009 at 6:55 pm
I teach English and must say that from a student your daughter’s age, this is rare and very special. Excellent work, Jess! And, I agree- she gets it from mama then adds her own spin
November 4, 2009 at 7:27 pm
NICE JOB Jess!
November 4, 2009 at 8:59 pm
Wow! I loved the article. She sounds a lot like you!
November 4, 2009 at 11:50 pm
that’s awesome!
Good work!
She must be very proud of herself!
November 5, 2009 at 7:58 am
She’s 13???
Wow.
Very, very impressed…..
November 5, 2009 at 9:06 am
Stand tall and puff out that chest, mama. There is no doubt where she gets her humor, snark, and frank, honest self evaluation.
Good job mom, kiddo, and teacher.
November 5, 2009 at 9:20 am
I teach at the University level.You are correct-the girl can write! If this is her starting level in high school make sure she gets some good teachers who will encourage her. I see a career here if she wants to head that way. Maybe she needs to get her own section on YOUR blog and can report on things from HER point of view….it would be interesting. J
November 5, 2009 at 9:44 am
Amazing job! One would not read that article and begin to guess it was written by a 13 year old, really mature take on the situation. And yes it does seem to be in the DNA! Good stuff Jess!
November 5, 2009 at 9:58 am
You’re rigth! That girl CAN write. Good for her – she sounds wise beyond her years.
November 5, 2009 at 10:00 am
Daughters are a spectacular thing. My oldest will be thirteen in a few weeks and man, there isn’t a day that goes by where I don’t look at that girl and think about how proud I am of her and give myself a little pat on the back for being such a kick ass mom.
Pat yourself on the back sister, YOU are a kick ass mom
~K
November 5, 2009 at 11:19 am
Jess continues to rock the house!
November 5, 2009 at 11:57 am
That is *awesome* for a 13-year-old. Y’all have been doing something right!
November 5, 2009 at 12:43 pm
I love sensual amber. But the one I really loved was discontinued. Never fails. Great idea for the kids.
November 5, 2009 at 12:49 pm
?? You’ve left me hanging Marty.. what was it?? Inquiring minds HAVE to know!!
November 5, 2009 at 2:12 pm
lotion comment misplaced no doubt
November 5, 2009 at 2:05 pm
Way to go Jess!
Heather
November 5, 2009 at 4:00 pm
Corey….she learned her writing skills from mama…believe it.
November 5, 2009 at 3:12 pm
Thanks Jill.. I’ll throw it in the hat..